Five Sentence Fiction : Ringing

Word Prompt: Ringing

She had never dared dream it possible to feel this happy.

The words he had spoken to her last night were responsible for this mornings  giddy feeling, lightness of being, butterfly stomach.

Three words and her whole world had been turned upside down, the ground beneath her had become unsteady, every certainty shattered as a new truth was revealed.

The sound of his voice was with her today, ringing in her ears, reassuring her that is wasn’t a dream, this was really happening.

‘ I love you’…and sitting in her garden, soaking up the summer sun, it truly was the sweetest sound she had ever heard.

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6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. McGuffyAnn
    Jan 27, 2013 @ 18:42:32

    What a beautiful take on this prompt. Thank you.

    Reply

  2. Sopphey
    Jan 29, 2013 @ 15:30:46

    This is so sweet and lovely. I especially love this sentence: “Three words and her whole world had been turned upside down, the ground beneath her had become unsteady, every certainty shattered as a new truth was revealed.” Beautifully done!

    Reply

  3. Catherine Rodie Blagg (Cup of Tea and a Blog)
    Feb 01, 2013 @ 02:34:13

    Hey! you made it to FYBF – yay!
    Loved this – it’s a real skill to capture a story in just five sentences. I really must give it a go xx

    Reply

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