Five Sentence Fiction- Pieces

Dedicated to Jude ( for encouraging me to write again…rather forcing me!!)

It was as if her life was a jigsaw puzzle, and all the pieces were scattered on the floor.

They had been there for days, weeks on end….ignored, overlooked, nobody bothering to piece it back together.

But suddenly a shift, somebody chanced upon the haphazard array of shiny puzzle pieces.

They were curious as to what each would reveal once placed together as a whole.

That person was the girl herself…time and time again she arrived at a simple truth… could only be her who could restore harmony and balance to her life….and through gritted teeth, she sat down on the floor and focused her attention on the challenge ahead.

4 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Robin Leigh Morgan
    Nov 25, 2013 @ 15:30:38

    Wonderful endeavor which proves something I’d heard growing up as a child:

    “If you should ever need a helping hand look at the bottom of your arms.”

    Have a GREAT WEEK !!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

    Hope you’ll find the time to comment on my endeavor here, and others.


  2. Nada Adel Sobhi
    Nov 28, 2013 @ 00:29:47

    Beautiful ending.
    I felt the word ‘piece’ was used too much though – even if it were used twice as a noun and once as a verb.

    Overall: Well done.


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