Five Sentence Fiction – Waiting

Word Prompt- Waiting

She had known for a while that she had been born in the wrong era.

A true romantic at heart, modern music did nothing for her.

But when she played Roy Orbision, ‘The Big O’….this 15 year old girls heart overflowed with joy, love in its purest form.

She had not yet been in love, she was still waiting…but she knew that day would soon come.

And when it did she hoped her beau would feel as impassioned about love as Mr Orbsion…She would finally be someone’s ‘Pretty Woman’, but above all she favoured being a complete mystery to her true love…

2 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Pat
    Aug 28, 2014 @ 10:49:39

    Interesting reply to the prompt — delightful dream/wishes of a young girl. Good job.

    And if I may point out —the word “bow” should be written “beau” – unless it was a deliberate reference or word play to suggest another meaning.


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