Five Sentence Fiction- Darkness

Five sentences written in Five minutes….taking this challenge to the next level!!

‘Mum, turn the light off!!’

Of late, this had been the demand that was bellowed in her direction once her son had settled himself into bed.

‘It’s not nice to yell Max, but if you ask in your nice voice, your quiet voice, I might consider it’ was what she wanted to whisper.

Instead, she made him wait, that would teach him that the art of yelling was not the way to get things done.

And when she finally peered her head in his room 15 minutes later, she was greeted by darkness and the soft snores of a very tired 9 year old.

3 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. cammiesonthefloor
    Sep 08, 2014 @ 11:41:51

    Clever mother, cute story


  2. anupat
    Sep 08, 2014 @ 16:39:24

    Really a cute story it is! 🙂


  3. Vinitha
    Sep 09, 2014 @ 12:14:04

    Cute story!! 🙂


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